Get professional feedback.

You’ve written a novel!

Congratulations! You’ve persevered to get that story out of your head and onto the page.

Now you need to know if the words you've written have the engaging effect on the reader you intend. Will your readers love and root for your characters? Will they keep turning the pages? Is the story in your mind represented on the page so the reader will not only understand it, but experience it deeply with your characters?

Your first or even second draft might not convey the story as you envision it.

When you read your own work, it’s impossible not to fill in the gaps with what you know in your mind. You need feedback to find out if your novel resonates with readers.

A professional manuscript review will show you what’s working and not working in your novel and give you ideas for how to fix it.

A manuscript review can help you if:

  • Your novel manuscript is complete.

  • You want good quality professional feedback you can trust.

  • You want feedback that focuses on the story as a whole, not just individual chapters or scenes.

  • You know that something is off or not working about your story and you're not sure what or how to fix it.

  • Your novel is getting rejected by literary agents or publishers and you don't know why.

  • You want direction for how to revise your novel.

How It Works

When you choose a manuscript review, you will send me your manuscript. I will read it, evaluate it, and leave comments throughout your manuscript about what works, what doesn’t work, and why. Then we will meet for a video call to discuss the feedback and next steps. You will get the call recording and notes.

I will not make changes to your manuscript or dictate exactly how to fix any issues I find. My comments are kind and encouraging, and when I have specific ideas of how you might fix an issue, I will suggest it gently. There are always multiple ways to address an issue, and the one that fits your vision for your story is the best one.

Manuscript Review Price: $25 per 1,000 words

Timeline: One week per 20,000 words

To get started, click the link below to schedule a call!

Book a free call to discuss your manuscript review.

  • “Working with Katelin was incredibly beneficial in helping me to improve my novels. Thanks to her, I have a better understanding about what is working with my book and what isn't. Her feedback was well thought out, thorough, and easy to understand and implement. Katelin's biggest strength, though, is that she cares about your project just as much as you do.”

    — Michael Mood

  • "Working with Katelin helped me wrap my mind around what I am trying to accomplish, and motivated me to make my book the best it can be. Her manuscript evaluation identified the problem areas, clearly articulated why they weren't working, and suggested what I could do to improve them. As a writer herself, Katelin understands the challenge of crafting a well-written story, and her calm and encouraging style made even big problems easier to swallow. She also shared what was working well, and gave tips to make my writing even stronger. She helped me believe I have a story worth telling."

    — N.L. Bechel